Thursday, December 10, 2009

Growth

当失意的人一文不名

沮丧忧郁

天边布满乌云

阳光失去了踪影

亲爱的朋友

接出肩膀让他的手靠一靠

这样简单

却美好



When a feller hasn't got a cent

And is fellin' kind of blue

And the clouds hang thick and dark

And won't let the sunshine thro

it's a great thing , oh my brethren

for a feller just to lay

his hand upon your shoulder

in a friendly sort o'way.


哈!最近写童诗,多多指教。

词简单直接,但深度多面转折
如果你们看到些什么可以留言告诉我哦!
若有不足之处请多多包涵。

3 comments:

盧姵伊 said...

呵呵,好像歌词。

囚禁者 said...

tO:佩伊

呵呵呵!是么?
也许我比较注重押韵

一柳枫 said...

太悲伤了,孩童要比较快乐一点,哈哈